Honorable Mention – Top 15 Winner of Emerging Screenwriters Screenplay Competition Season 5 “This is probably the most encouraging coverage I’ve ever had on one of my screenplays. It’s clearly not a perfect script, but I appreciate that there is a nice balance of what’s good about it and what isn’t so good and needs work. I’ve been through a pretty discouraging ‘dark phase’ with my writing for a while, but this reviewer’s encouraging words really rocked me out of it! Thanks for the support….”
~ Chip Clark.
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~ Phil P.
TOP 100 Winner of Emerging Screenwriters Screenplay Competition Season 1 “To the team, and especially whoever wrote these notes…the best feedback I’ve had in years!!!!! – and I work with some of the top “Hollywood” studio consultants! Not huge comments, but just the right points nailed to take it from a really good script, as you said, to even more smoking! So much appreciated!!!! Loved the notes! If only I could find a manager then they could of helped me tweak this to perfection already, but you’ve just done it for me!!! Maybe I will actually get a manager now one day… lol!!! Huge huge tks for your excellent bits of perfection ideas!!!! They were SO good yet so simple!”
~ Sundae J-O.
“I just received the coverage. I just wanted to let you know that I have entered numerous contests over the last 3 years with this script and I am thrilled with this feedback. Usually coverage from contests means vague book reports, but the coverage I received makes it clear what needs to be done to improve the script. I can’t thank Emerging Screenwriters enough!”
~ Sam L.
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“I didn’t wanna send it [to the production company] until I got notes from you because you’re always so helpful & the notes are so great.”
~ Larry S.
“During the time of submission till now, I’ve gotten lots of notes from screenplayreaders.com to Coverageink.com to talentville.com to a personal friend .com , and I’ve done a couple rewrites. Most of the concerns addressed in my rewrites are the same concerns this reader raised. This is simply a clear indication that this reader is a pro that understands the genre.”
~ Chidi E.
“Thank you very much for the analysis. I appreciate the feedback being direct and, most importantly, actionable. It has given me a starting point for further revisions to this pilot script and development of the series. I will keep this feedback by my side as I do so. On a more global note, the feedback gives me insight to help me grow as a writer. For example, I’ve been told I give too many details in the action lines, now, thanks to this I can see I went too far in the other direction.
Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment on my script and helping me grow as a writer.”
~ Jason A.
“I wanted to thank you for the scene specific notes in my analysis. They made a lot of sense and, while some notes seemed small at first glance, they really made a BIG difference to those scenes. I appreciate that you took the time to give me such insightful critique.”
~ Jack M.
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~ Kathryn K.
“I am writing to let Emerging Screenwriters know I have received my script analysis and the feedback was phenomenal! I read it, absorbed it, and revised my script incorporating as much of the analysis as I could. What was great about the analysis was that much of what was critiqued as needing another look or revision were points that concerned me also. I must say, the analysis and feedback was invaluable and well worth the wait. I have made revisions – in enough time for resubmission! Thanks a billion!”
~ Kenya J.
“Thank you for the feedback for my piece. I cannot fault the report. The good bits are, of course, welcome (‘chest-swelling’) and gave me encouragement to proceed. The criticism is constructive, helpful and well received. It is certainly not the superficial rhetoric I have received from other so-called reviewers, which sometimes makes one think – why bother! Thank you again for a job well done.”
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Thanks for being part of my journey.”
“Thank you for the feedback it’s opened my eyes quite a bit. Further, more I knew something was wrong with it, and I couldn’t pin it down until now. My family tends to sugar coat it, and most of them said it’s got a solid story. I didn’t know if I should believe them or not. I like honesty even if it means hurting someones feelings. At least I can look over the script with open eyes instead of sugar coated eyes. I took a closer look at the beginning two days ago and you are right about a lot of things. This script does need a lot more description and it does need a better beginning.
Thanks once again!”
~ Richard W.T.